Writing Task 2 Technique Assessment

Task Response

6.0
The candidate's response is only partially adequate. More weight has been given to the advantages of learning societal skills at home while the matter of in-school development in this area has been neglected. This has produced an unbalanced response which has adversely affected the candidate's score.

TO IMPROVE: The candidate should give more detail about the pros and cons of in-school learning. For example, the candidates writes:
“..parents are not that much careful about their children in that case in that case school is the best institution for them."

No information is given about how school can provide a better learning environment than the home. Coherence and
Coherence and Cohesion

6.0
While there is logical development to the candidate's response, a greater, and more accurate, range of cohesive devices would improve the flow of the text considerably. For example, the candidate writes:

"According to analyze the pros and cons .." Follow “The IELTS School of Toronto” on n

This is an inaccurate use of a linking device. Better would be:
"In order to analyze the pros and cons ... etc."


TO IMPROVE: The candidate should could use a more accurate and wider variety of cohesive devices according to the meaning of the text.
Lexical Resource

6.0
The candidate has demonstrated the ability to use a reasonable range of vocabulary but there are significant errors which affect meaning. Examples include, 'On' (line 1), 'prior' (line 6), 'well' and 'learn' (line 10). TO IMPROVE: The candidate should improve the accuracy of word choices, particularly in the context of familiar phrases such as "in the long term" or "In recent years".
Grammatical Range and Accuracy

6.0
The candidate has attempted complex sentences and a range of grammar structures but with a considerable number of errors which, at times, have affected meaning. Examples include conditional structures without 'if' (line 3), missing prepositions (line 3), inaccurate tense usage (line 9) TO IMPROVE: The candidate should improve the accuracy of word choices, particularly in the context of familiar phrases such as "in the long term" or "In recent years".

1) Appropriate use of prepositions.
2) Choosing the correct tense.

Did you know?

Students who register for the Academic Writing Task 2 course receive detailed feedback on:
1) an introduction
2) a body paragraph
3) a conclusion
4) a full Task 2 essay

Writing Task 2 Band Score

Band 6.0
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